Sample Poetry Manuscript
					
					This is a sample submission package of four poems.
Your name and contact info should appear in the upper-left corner of each poem.
Any line longer than the width of the page should continue to the next with a hanging indent.
If a poem runs more than one page, each following page requires a header as shown.
				
			William Shunn (he/him)
27 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
[email protected]
 
Memory Lane
She strains at the leash,
Trying to turn the corner.
“Not that way,” I say.
But Ella insists,
So I give in and follow.
Not that big a deal.
This short, narrow lane,
It’s a valid path back home,
Not such a detour.
Along the sidewalk
We rush, my arm stretched out straight, 
Not pausing to sniff.
She stops at the porch,
Looks at the door, looks at me,
Not old now but young.
We were gone six years,
Back now in the neighborhood
Not even six weeks.
I wish we could knock,
But our friends are not at home,
Not now, not for years.
They fled this city
Even sooner than we did,
Not fond of Gotham
But fond of our dog,
Who wags on their former stoop,
Not fenced in by time.
 
William Shunn (he/him)
18 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
[email protected]
 
Salt Crusted on Automotive Glass
Between me, safe in my seat on this bus,
And the decadent majesty of the salmon-red cliffs of eastern
     Utah,
A ghost landscape stands sentinel,
As if etched into the glass by a cadre of capering goblins.
The residue of a hasty window washing--
Loops and whorls of dirt left untouched, uncleansed,
Unrepentent, at the bottom of the glass on each fluid upstroke--
It sparkles, gritty and salt-sharp in the oblique sunlight,
Like a series of pearly solar flares,
Or a graph of the desert’s pulsebeat,
Or spectral negatives of a washed-out sandstone arch,
Photographed in stages over eons of time--
Snapshots from a child-god’s flip-book--
Frothing, leaping, peaking, then falling back into the ground
Like fountains of earth,
A time-lapse planetary signature
That will melt and return to dust
With the next unlikely rain.
	 
	 
	 
	 
 
William Shunn (he/him)
18 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
[email protected]
 
Road Trip, 1995
I-80
Wyoming
night time
snowstorm
eastern slope
Continental Divide
15-foot U-Haul truck
  50 to 60 miles per hour
      girlfriend white-knuckled
            behind the big wheel
                swerving skidding 
              on the downhill ice
           all our possessions
        rocking in back
      not quite
   overbalanced
I pump my
passenger brake
of course to no effect
snowflakes like hyperspatial
streaks in the headlight beams
    I gently suggest slowing down
            or even pulling over to let
                          me drive instead
                              but not gently
                                       enough
                              I’m an excellent
                            driver she insists
                      you should have seen
               that time I spun out in Texas
    and I didn’t even run off the road
  but I grew up driving in snow
I tell her and you didn’t
you have to slow
down
  it’s the wrong thing
            to say and we
William Shunn
Road Trip, page 2, continue stanza
                            fishtail
                                            again
                                                              one
                                            moment
                          of terror in the
          long, slow slide from
west coast to east coast
one harrowing strobe-lit frame 
   from the superslow-motion
           accident that is
                    us
 
William Shunn (he/him)
67 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
[email protected]
 
Passing
It’s getting harder these days 
to tell the crazy people from the sane, 
what with technology the way it is.
It used to be that talking to yourself 
in public was a sure sign of instability, 
like wearing a sign that said, 
“Steer clear of me, I’m not quite right, 
I might be dangerous, if only to myself.”
But now we all do it, carry with us 
an invisible chorus of voices 
in a magic Bluetooth cloud, insistent, demanding 
voices clamoring for attention, screening out 
the real world around us, making us each 
more dangerous than twenty actual crazy people, 
a more present threat to public safety than 
any potential suicide bomber.
Or at least more annoying.
Thorazine does nothing at all to fix it.
The implications of eye contact have changed too.
It used to be that when someone looked at you 
when they spoke, it meant they were talking to you.
Not anymore.  This morning as I was walking the dog, 
I heard the rasp of a window being shoved open, 
and a shrill voice saying, “I told you 
last time what was going to happen.”
I looked up to see a head and shoulders push out 
a fourth-floor window, and the person 
was looking right at me.  “What?” I called up, 
thinking that Ella and I had been mistaken 
for someone else, maybe someone who hadn’t 
cleaned up after a mess on the sidewalk.
“Oh, I’m on the phone,” said the smiling head, 
pointing to its ear, and carried on talking 
in the same tone of voice, as if both 
conversations were one.  And maybe they were.
I still don’t know.
 
William Shunn
Passing, page 2, begin new stanza
Crazy, right?  I’ll say!
But I was talking about people’s voices.
Not the ones they speak with, but the ones 
they hear in their heads, the ones no one else 
can hear.  I don’t have a Bluetooth earpiece, 
but I still hear voices in my head.  Often 
when I have something important I need to say 
to someone, I rehearse the conversation 
in my head, and sometimes, during my lines, 
I’ll slip and speak them out loud.  Or more often, 
when I’m remembering an awkward interaction 
from earlier that day and thinking how 
I could have said something better, 
I’ll just say it that better way, it just pops out,
and I might be driving, or walking 
down the street, or lying in bed with my wife, 
and I know I’ve just said something out loud, 
out of the blue, out of nowhere, out of left field.
I’m busted.  And my wife will 
put down her magazine and give me that look, 
you know the one, the one that’s half amused, 
half worried, the one that says, 
“Are you crazy, husband?” 
And maybe I am, I don’t know.
No, of course not.  I do it all the time too.
But I was trying to talk about how hard it is 
to tell the sane people from the crazies 
these days.  Personally I think cell phones 
are just an excuse.  All this time 
most of us have just been passing, 
and now we don’t have to pretend anymore.
 
					Last updated 25 October 2025
				
			
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